WrappedinReflection star member
Number of posts : 3078 Age : 36 Location : In the Dark Heart of the Night, Iowa : : More Numbers : 7556739 Registration date : 2008-08-09
| Subject: Vanquishing Loneliness with Poetry Mon Oct 19, 2009 2:26 am | |
| Before me This man Of poetry Embodied boldness Sapphire crystalline Fragments of fire Engulfing the energy Creating wonder And joy within Passionate soul Igniting my own A wind of brilliance To pass upon my flesh And a voice of sunlight Dancing through the nights -SKC
The words we speak And the meanings we interpret Impersonal & unfeeling Burning chills through my mind Leaking a trail of frost as blue as those eyes The things we forget to mention As part of the relationship falters Like the skip of my heart-beat Or lack there-of As we bring the confusion to light Only to remain in the dark Upon the days of misconstrued And loud, f**king silence I wait for you While I should question my actions And my whispers upon the wind You stare into your coffee Threading the moments together Only to wait for them to fall apart The time-threader, heart-mender Man with an infinite to-do list I wait for you as I never thought I'd do -SKC | |
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RedAngel star member
Number of posts : 5385 Age : 46 Location : CT/NC: Josephine on my mind : : More Numbers : 7411211 Registration date : 2008-11-30
| Subject: Re: Vanquishing Loneliness with Poetry Mon Oct 19, 2009 4:41 pm | |
| ^^ Beautiful work, WIR. Each poem takes a moment and unpacks it; looks at every facet of what might otherwise be overlooked in a series of moments. | |
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WrappedinReflection star member
Number of posts : 3078 Age : 36 Location : In the Dark Heart of the Night, Iowa : : More Numbers : 7556739 Registration date : 2008-08-09
| Subject: Re: Vanquishing Loneliness with Poetry Tue Oct 20, 2009 1:42 pm | |
| Thank you, RedAngel | |
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TheDarkHippie senior member
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| Subject: Re: Vanquishing Loneliness with Poetry Tue Oct 20, 2009 3:06 pm | |
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WrappedinReflection star member
Number of posts : 3078 Age : 36 Location : In the Dark Heart of the Night, Iowa : : More Numbers : 7556739 Registration date : 2008-08-09
| Subject: Re: Vanquishing Loneliness with Poetry Thu Oct 22, 2009 6:05 pm | |
| Thank you, Hippie *smile* | |
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cynfullov star member
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| Subject: Re: Vanquishing Loneliness with Poetry Thu Oct 22, 2009 6:37 pm | |
| They're both lovely and very good pieces WrappedinTeflection.
"The things we forget to mention"
... You give the reader a lot to think about. | |
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