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| Subject: Sleep and Showers Wed Oct 21, 2009 9:03 pm | |
| five and twenty years I could sit here in a dream listening to the patters of the rain on my window pane so many hours pass by as it beats out my lullaby
And in this reverie I see him standing there no wars or wounds to show his years smiling from the shades and singing to the rain
so softly I go into his arms for this night and lull in the vapours of the gentle showers and finally at peace they'll find me as if sleeping
as my soul has left the thing there.
Eh... I'm half asleep and it sounds good at the time. It's strange the little things that come to mind when close to sleep. |
| | | GhostRed active member
Number of posts : 445 Age : 39 Location : DC Area : : More Numbers : 7578844 Registration date : 2008-07-23
| Subject: Re: Sleep and Showers Wed Oct 21, 2009 9:21 pm | |
| - nsanelilmunky wrote:
so softly I go into his arms for this night and lull in the vapours of the gentle showers and finally at peace they'll find me as if sleeping
I like this a lot, it's very Cure-esque. Beautiful! | |
| | | RedAngel star member
Number of posts : 5385 Age : 46 Location : CT/NC: Josephine on my mind : : More Numbers : 7412524 Registration date : 2008-11-30
| Subject: Re: Sleep and Showers Thu Oct 22, 2009 9:57 am | |
| Wow. What lovely imagery, Nsane! | |
| | | WrappedinReflection star member
Number of posts : 3078 Age : 36 Location : In the Dark Heart of the Night, Iowa : : More Numbers : 7558052 Registration date : 2008-08-09
| Subject: Re: Sleep and Showers Thu Oct 22, 2009 6:08 pm | |
| I'm adoring the first line. That's how I feel when I am having a euphoric moment that I don't want to end Very lovely indeed! | |
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| Subject: Re: Sleep and Showers Thu Oct 22, 2009 7:44 pm | |
| - GhostRed wrote:
- nsanelilmunky wrote:
so softly I go into his arms for this night and lull in the vapours of the gentle showers and finally at peace they'll find me as if sleeping
I like this a lot, it's very Cure-esque. Beautiful! - RedAngel wrote:
- Wow. What lovely imagery, Nsane!
- WrappedinReflection wrote:
- I'm adoring the first line.
That's how I feel when I am having a euphoric moment that I don't want to end Very lovely indeed! Danke. Heh. Maybe I should write more when half asleep? |
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| | | | TheDarkHippie senior member
Number of posts : 1101 Age : 32 Location : Pburgh, NY : : More Numbers : 7346070 Registration date : 2009-01-17
| Subject: Re: Sleep and Showers Mon Nov 02, 2009 4:27 am | |
| eh, sorry not much help there, but your poetry is great nsane!! | |
| | | ravengrim Moderator
Number of posts : 7192 Age : 51 Location : At The End Of Time : : The Fallen Angel : : More Numbers : 7685943 Registration date : 2008-07-21
| Subject: Re: Sleep and Showers Mon Nov 02, 2009 8:15 pm | |
| Beautiful poem nsane. You know for some reason seeing the name of this thread I thought it was going to be a poll ,kind of like do you shower before you go to sleep or when you get up in the morning. And I'm sorry I don't know anything about making doll faces. | |
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