Online Novel about Goths and the Supernatural

I've written a short novel, Dark Altamaha, about high school Goths who get caught up in a battle between supernatural forces. They also suffer abuse from others because they are different/independent. The story is at www.darkaltamaha.com and is free to read. There's also no advertising on the website. Please give me some constructive criticism about the novel.
Thanks,
Daal1

Hi,

Now that you've posted quite successfully about your "short novel" perhaps finding the lifestyles area and making an introduction post could be in order, Unless all you're trying to do is spam that is...

Sorry about that. Thanks for the reminder.